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karebear07
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since 2003-04-15
Posts 64
Texas

0 posted 2003-04-19 05:04 PM


My home wraps around me like something suffocating me.
I want to be released and go some other place.
I just want them to leave me be.
Stop grabbing at my throat and let me live like I want.
I cry because life is so confusing and all i can think about is leaving.
The dust of my days come over me and makes me sick to my stomache.
I remember the yelling at because I just didn't get to it quick enough.
Please just leave me alone and let me be my own.
All I do is grab hold of my head and scream trying to figure out why this is happening.
I sit in my room letting the sounds just drown out what I am thinking.
The sounds, The sounds are so unfriendly.
Unfriendly because they bring on something heavy.
                 -Kara <><

© Copyright 2003 Kara - All Rights Reserved
SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
1 posted 2003-04-19 08:04 PM


This is a beautiful poem! And I can relate to it as well. Absolutely wonderful poem!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Peacebri
Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44

2 posted 2003-04-20 03:24 PM


great job, as usual kara! great poem, i think everyone can relate, i certainly can.
StephyBob07
Junior Member
since 2003-04-18
Posts 37
Texas
3 posted 2003-04-20 04:25 PM


good poem, kara. it's ok, we all have this problem. you'll get through it! ~stephy

Dreaming is the best thing you can do.

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