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karebear07 Member
since 2003-04-15
Posts 64Texas |
I have one last chance to say I'm sorry. You were hurt because I didn't want to say I love you. I'm so wrong and stand in this light that shines down on my words i did not say. Please go away so I don't have to think this hard. But through and through I relized that I love you too. Ended it is for now anyways. Maybe we will meet again some day. Love hurts sometimes but yet it feels so wonderful to just see you come by. Why did we fade away into nothing but the deep grey? I Love you and I told you that but I guess my last chance was taken up by someone else. Wish me luck in this world because one by one I will cry the tears for losing you forever after. -Kara <>< |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
This is Jeremy Halstead reply, not sing'n fool's...I forgot to switch the username. really heartfelt...liked the line abot the light shining down upon the words you failed to speak, making their presence that much more painful and regretable....good job. J.H. [This message has been edited by sing'n fool (04-17-2003 06:43 PM).] |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
very deep and full of heart. I feel the loss you describe. A tear jerker. Great job! sing'n fool |
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ParkerT745 New Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 2TEXAS |
Kara~ out of all the poems ive read and heard from you, this one was one of the few that really tuched. Great job and PLZ never stop doing what you do!! =)alwaz-TyLeR <>< |
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StephyBob07 Junior Member
since 2003-04-18
Posts 37Texas |
Kara~ wow! im so impressed! u are so talented! thanx for telling me about this site! im a member now (obviously)so look for my poems too! great job! |
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