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karebear07
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since 2003-04-15
Posts 64
Texas

0 posted 2003-04-16 05:14 PM


I look into the purple of when it hurt.
The black of bruises everywhere from all this
verbal abuse.
I bleed these tears upon my soul, my heart cries
out for release from it all.
The grasp it has upon everything I disown is so
tight that I’m glad I cried it to its end.
I run away from it all because the daggers of my
mind are obsessed with haunting me.
Disturbing silence has us all in a bind.
We all fight to get out of the closed encounters of
the dripping decay of our lifeless bodies.
Turning around slowly that way I won’t be scared.
The faces press their sharp teeth through my skin,
nagging at me until I drop from all the insanity.
Voices are wrapped around me.
I shake my head and scream in terror of the
blackness that blinds me.
All I see is the blood stains from the past
haunting me.

By: Kara Melton <><



© Copyright 2003 Kara - All Rights Reserved
Peacebri
Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44

1 posted 2003-04-16 05:22 PM


WOW! That has got to be the best one of yours ive heard. I totally understand you and get where this comes from...
Peace!
Bri

SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
2 posted 2003-04-19 09:32 PM


I agree with Bri...I think that is quite possibly one of your best! The imagery in that was absolutely fantastic!!! It's a shame you didn't consider it for the book, that one would have definetly made it! Beautiful job! I love it!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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