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SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

0 posted 2003-04-15 09:50 PM

Traveling down a perplexed path,
Surrounded completely by hate and wrath.

Blurry visions, cannot see clear,
Body trembling, drowning in fear.

Screaming inside, heart going to burst,
Still moving forward, but expecting the worst.

Aimlessly roaming, every moment the path extends,
Ambivelant turmoil, the path never ends.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

1 posted 2003-04-19 08:27 PM

great write...

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

2 posted 2003-04-19 08:46 PM

if only I know what ambivelent meant...oh, well, I quite sure you used it right and it sounds good...so rock on and keep bring'n 'um.

J.H.

Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H.

[This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (04-19-2003 08:49 PM).]

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

3 posted 2003-04-19 09:20 PM

Haha...Ambivelant means, "to have conflicting thoughts, or feelings." Thanks for your replies!! I appreciate you guys reading my poems soo much!

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

4 posted 2003-04-20 11:52 AM

Good write! You used plenty of descriptive words, I like! hehe ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

Peacebri
Junior Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 44

5 posted 2003-04-20 03:57 PM

once again, great poem. terrific job, i really like this one!

StephyBob07
Junior Member

since 2003-04-18

Posts 37
Texas

6 posted 2003-04-20 04:23 PM

great, great poem! u definitely have a way with words. u have my vote! ~stephy

Dreaming is the best thing you can do.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

7 posted 2003-04-20 08:15 PM

awesome choice of vocabulary megan. lol some were difficult but mr. dictionary is always ready for helping out lol. great job on this one.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

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