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Shadows of Infinity (unedited)
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Shadows of Infinity (unedited) |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
Here in the shadows of infinity some may call dreams I fashion my own identity rearrange the world as I deem No more masks [Edited by Moderator] remembering Forget my past The thoughts were dismembering me slowly as internal forces clashed but now I have found my peace at last I have created from within myself an entity to destroy everything I hated now Im lost in a world I thought up confused, and lost caught up in a world where I was the boss but it never was true only in the minds eye just idle thoughts of life without you [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-15-2003 01:51 PM).] |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
I really like this poem...it really makes ya think...it has great emotion...good job..keep writing!!!! Jenn **It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not** |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
good job *the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time* |
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