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EllinneT
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since 2003-04-04
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0 posted 2003-04-10 12:37 PM


             A friend who is Unworthy


At one time, you were
my best friend.I thought
we would be until the end.
I start to sigh when I see
you with that one guy, I
know it's hard as you walk
by to even say hi it hurts
to know that your with that
same one that tore me so.
A friend who is unworthy,
would fit your description,
for the things you have,
put me through. I know
someday you will come back
cause i know he will hurt you,
     just like that.


EllinneT


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Lurking
1 posted 2003-04-10 12:39 PM


Sounds complicated, though I hope things turn out ok. Great write, keep on sharing

Andrew

leighsa
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since 2003-02-27
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2 posted 2003-04-10 03:02 PM


Tennille, THis is such a  great poem...
I know how you feel, i know why u are mad..
All of this poem is so true,But you know i am here for you no matter what anyone says...
I love you so much tennille, dont forget that , just some friends arnt what you think they are in the end when they hurt you ....
I will talk to ya lata..
Luv ya
Ashgiel


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since 2003-02-23
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3 posted 2003-04-10 03:30 PM


Never happened to me but I have some friends who feel the same way about someone else.  Nice poem

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

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