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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
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Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2003-04-09 07:51 PM


Alone in the night,
Tearing through this silent emptiness,
Heart so torn...
Never thought it would happen,
Searcing for myself is a false hope,
Unable to find the light,
Finally...
I'm confined to the darkness within my soul.

"Poetry, she thought, wasn't written to be analyzed; it was meant to inspire without reason, to touch without understanding." -Nicholas Sparks

© Copyright 2003 Jessica Dodson - All Rights Reserved
Scandalous
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since 2003-04-10
Posts 9

1 posted 2003-04-10 10:14 AM


nice poem girl, had depth... i can def. relate to it... keep droppin! i liked this a lot..
SilentTears
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
2 posted 2003-04-13 01:59 PM


Very good write. I especially liked the line, "Searching for myself is a falso hope." Wonderful!
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