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tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
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0 posted 2003-04-08 06:32 PM


dodging bullets
white washed walls
stained with red
find a secret...
deep within

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Lexy
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1 posted 2003-04-08 10:44 PM


short yet good, I think if you expounded on this it could be an even greater piece.
I"ve read a lot of your poms and I like you style of writing very much..
~Lexy

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2 posted 2003-04-12 04:35 PM




(big hugggssssssss) This is very poignant and powerful, sweet friend, sadly too much of this goes on in so many neighborhoods and the blood will sadly always be remembered! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
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since 2003-01-25
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Florida USA
3 posted 2003-04-12 07:10 PM


Very nice

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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