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Teen Poetry #6

From me to You

Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-04-08 01:46 AM

This is a letter
from me to you
a reminder of the things
that we used to do

Remember the time
that we first kissed
and second period
the first class you missed

Remember when we
were at the fairground
and where the sand got....
from us fooling around

Do you remember
that one time
in late december
it was the last time

I remember
the look on your face
when I told you
I lost my case

I even recall
the look in your eyes
the very first time
my hand traced your thighs

I wrote this letter
from me to you
for things like the sweater
that I gave to you

this is the end of my letter
from me to you
I guess it's time
to say goodbye to you

-"Poet Nascitar, Non Fit"
-"A Poet Is Born, Not Made"

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

1 posted 2003-04-08 02:33 PM

That was so sweet and emotional, very nice poem

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

2 posted 2003-04-09 02:50 PM

That was a great poem! It made my eyes water and it made me think of mah first love... great work!~

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

3 posted 2003-05-18 12:14 PM

great poem... they rhyming was a little off at times, but i think it came across better... true emotional meaning is more important than how it sounds

"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives"

xxshadowxx
Junior Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 43
Texas