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LuckyFelix
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since 2003-01-17
Posts 34
Here.

0 posted 2003-04-05 10:53 PM



I saw her as something great,
precious, flawless, and pure..
Until I saw her through clear eyes,
unobscured by infatuation.

True vision.

Her words dont effect me,
like they once had.
Dull and mild..
like everyone else.

True audience.

Her aroma of innocence
now shrouded in cigarette smoke.
Like the common masses..
Quite ordinary.

True scent.

I cannot savor what we had,
not after what shes done.
It was all tainted,
with pain and hurt.

True flavor.

When I hold her now
shes but a person.
A normal everyday someone.
Just a face, like the rest.

True feeling.

© Copyright 2003 Adam Alexander - All Rights Reserved
BabieDoll
Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE
1 posted 2003-04-06 04:43 PM


Haha...I'm first response! Alex, I REALLY liked this poem...I think it's one of the best I've ever read from you. And it's definately going in my binder! *lmao* Keep up the good work hun!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
2 posted 2003-04-06 09:39 PM


I really like this one!
Formatted perfectly.
Excellent.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

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