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A.L
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0 posted 2003-04-05 11:39 AM


Right when I think things are going good, the unexpected happens to me, for every good time it seems, theres bad hiding, waiting to be set free, My heart used to skip a beat wheneverI saw your face, now when I look at you, I see her in your eyes, is she what takes my place?

She or them or however many there are, you can't play with my mind anymore, you've taken me too far,
All those lies you said to me, you said to everyone else, I thought with me you'd be different, theres no cure for the pain that I've felt,

I believed you and fell for every word that you spoke, As sincere as you sounded, its hard to realize your just a joke, I can't look at you and still think these things , beacuse its not the you that I know, This is someone else, a stranger whose face refuses to show,

I don't want to believe and of this, I wish I never knew, As naieve as I can be, To me, none of this is true, The weakness of me, just runs back to you, knowing that people don't change; But I cant control the things I do, I cause myself the pain,

Was I a fool to think that you were any different from the rest, Leading me on and letting me think that I was the one that you kept,You cant keep me on the side when she's not around, you cant tell me anymore lies, Don't deny it when I bring up the things I found out, the truth doesn't compromise,

Don't expect me to come around anymore and act like nothings changed, Don't hide anything from me anymore, guilt is written all over your face, Are you even happy with her? Do you know your what I used to need, I want to know if any peice of you ever felt the same way about me,

Now I'm left here thinking, what did I do wrong, What will I be left with, Now that you might be gone, All those things I said before, Don't mean a thing at all, It's not my fault I think like this, Your the one who made me fall,

Part of me wishes you'd come back, the other part leaves you behind, another part can't seem to let you go, that part controls my mind...


-Ali-

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-04-05 10:17 PM


Ali, my heart breaks for you, but at the same time, I remember a time when I broke up with someone, and yep, I had a really hard time of it, until? I played a little trick on my mind.

I simply pretended it hadn't happened. That he was STILL there, but ignoring me in that charming way he had. <--sarcasm

Worked wonders for me.

Heart hugs for healing, friend. New shoes always cheered me up too. hmmm...in fact, I could use a new pair right now...*wink*


A.L
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since 2003-03-15
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2 posted 2003-04-06 10:52 AM


thank you so much! It helps to hear words of advice from someone who's already been through this! Its tough but thank you so much!

-Ali-

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