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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-07-08 06:48 PM



Tears crashing like a flood,
           SUFFERING
Are you to blind to see what he's causing?
           HATRED
He doesn't love you, he just uses you!
           BLIND
Be his slave, be his wench, don't include me!
           WATCH
He curses, he puts me down,
          
          He is not a man...only a tyrant...
                best of his kind.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

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Lexy
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1 posted 2003-07-08 09:46 PM


powerful! very much so..Its a shame to have to dislike ppl. to this degree, but I guess they bring it on themselves. Great piece.
~Lex...

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in the pouring rain
2 posted 2003-07-09 11:54 AM


and how true could you get it. most guys are tyrants, and its scary isn't it?

quote:
Tears crashing like a flood,
           SUFFERING
Are you to blind to see what he's causing?
           HATRED



i liked the all over topic of the poem, it was really good.


thanks for the read,

riley

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

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