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Deep_Inside
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i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-04-04 01:53 PM


Death came
To see me again
He said he found me
From all my sin

All the trouble
There has been
And all the things
I kept within

He began to tell me
What to do
How to take the pain
And work it through

Through the pain
Of every day strife
Through the people
That takes my life

So I found a place
Where it would all cease
I found a place
To rest in peace

I doing it again
Because I can't do
I doing it again
Because now I'm through

As I went over this time
I didn't think
This time
I just let my body sink

The rope snapped
As it had before
And as I was again
I was on the floor

When I picked myself up
I’ve never been so alone
I couldn't see through my tears
As I started my walk home

[This message has been edited by Deep_Inside (04-04-2003 05:04 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-05 03:28 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Never let the memories get so hard on yourself, dearest friend, it is so difficult to accept the loss of loved ones, I know, but you must never let yourself hang in the gallows of your thoughts, for they are always watching over you from up above and they want you to be happy and encourage you to go on to LIVE. (sigh) You are not alone, their love is always in your presence, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matt, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2003-04-05 10:05 PM


My heart is with you...

I'll spare ya the "circle of life" lion king speech. It wasn't much comfort to me either.

But know that I felt this'n.

Hugs.

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