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leighsa
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since 2003-02-27
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0 posted 2003-04-01 09:18 PM


As each day passes,

We try to find the happiness,

A sence of who we are,

And just when we think we leave it in our grasp,

A familiar wound is re~opened.

The pain so real, Inner peace so far.....

Innate human nature,

Provides us with an ability to love and be loved.

Often we neglect the loving and yearn for
thelatter,

Vulnerable and fragile creatures searching above.

To god in our heavens,

To guide us into bliss with the magic of another
soul.

That person stands only in our shoes,

We are all truley beatiful and special people,

Putting our arms around ourselves ,

MAKING US WHOLE.......

Ashgiel


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1 posted 2003-04-01 09:21 PM


Well written, I really liked the meaning and emotion behind this piece, very touching and thought provoking!
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

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2 posted 2003-04-05 04:16 PM




(big hugggsssssss) We are all God's children and He embraces us all with love and compassion and through the tears and understanding rests the gifts and rewards of life! (sigh) This is wonderful, God Bless You we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
3 posted 2003-04-17 09:24 PM


This is a great poem

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

StephyBob07
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 37
Texas
4 posted 2003-04-18 01:49 PM


beautiful poem. it's really inspiring.
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