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2gd4uand2gd2beat
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since 2003-04-01
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0 posted 2003-04-01 08:24 PM


Out deep in the forest,
where I thought I could hide.
Friends and family I though I could abide.
Down deep in my arms is where I hide my face,
Because I know I'm lost, and cannot find my place.
Looking at the mountains and the sea,
I know that's the place to be.
Looking out where I live today,
On the court is where I play.
I shall not hide nor cry,
This thing will help me get by.
This darkness is my life,
My family, like a knife.
Look at me, standing here,
Waiting for my friends to re~appear.
Thanks to them I can live my dream,
Shining like stars as a nice light beam.

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Match
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since 2002-07-01
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1 posted 2003-04-01 08:29 PM


*clap"* I really liked this one

I'm just kickin it up

leighsa
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since 2003-02-27
Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America
2 posted 2003-04-01 08:44 PM


This is  a good write.. Welcome to passions, i hope to hear more of your poetry..
Ashgiel  


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since 2003-01-03
Posts 696
washington, USA
3 posted 2003-04-01 09:19 PM


Wonderfull meaning behind this one. Nicely done!
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

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