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Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-03-31 03:11 PM

Where did you go
To hide way
Under the bridge
To spend the day

You ran away
After that fight
Away from your thoughts
To spend the night

You cried
As you ran from me
The tears in you eyes
That I couldn’t see

The complete shame
Across your face
That reminds me
Of that place

The thoughts
I instilled in you
That you held
To be so true

You found out
They where a lie
When I couldn’t
Tell you why

There’s just one thing
I have to say
It hurts me that
Your not here today

Dance
Junior Member

since 2003-03-28

Posts 34

1 posted 2003-03-31 06:42 PM

WOW! Great flow! Beautiful!

~*~DaNcE~*~

Albino_Jenn
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-03-31 11:07 PM

Great poem..very touching..you have a very sweet heart and I hope it stays that way!! Sweetestness and kindness will always prevail!!! And to have such an attitude is simply wonderful!!

Jenn

**It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not**

SweetGhettoFlurt
Junior Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 15
Milw,WI

3 posted 2003-04-02 09:37 AM

Thiz poem wuz really touching. It also had a real good flow.

*~*SweetGhettoFlurt@aol.com*~*Marie*~*

AJMGW
Member

since 2002-11-19

Posts 57
Galaxy Roller Rink

4 posted 2003-04-02 11:56 AM

ahh that was so beautiful. voted!
AJMGW

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

5 posted 2003-04-03 04:10 PM

I just really liked the honesty and the emotion in this. Very open and sweet. Nice job

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

6 posted 2003-04-03 11:05 PM

voted for u boo.loved the flow of this poem.and its touching in its own mysterious way.

keep writing cos i'm definetly on the look out for ur poetry.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-04-05 03:33 PM

(big hugggsssssss) You, Matt, are a very compassionate and sensitive person and you did the best you could, sadly so many don't want to open their hearts to someone probably either because they are too scared or fear so insecure! (sad sigh) You truly are comfort to this forum, God Bless You, you have my angelic vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matt, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

8 posted 2003-04-05 07:40 PM

That was a very nicely written poem, thank you so much for sharing it and letting us enjoy it too.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

9 posted 2003-04-06 09:43 PM

Beautiful poem! I especially love the end.
Great job.
Here's my vote, good luck with book submission!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

10 posted 2003-04-06 09:57 PM

oh my gosh you would not belive how hard that hit me. I went out with a guy(who happened to be named Matt) and well lets just say some **** went down, he hates me, and that sounds like something he would write. the poem itself(for me), without my background, was very good. you have my vote.
Jenni

don't ever let others tell you who you are

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