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0 posted 2003-03-30 09:26 PM



Breathe. In and out.
Calm yourself, look about.
Enemies near,
one shallow tear.
In a deep breath,
out with my fear.
A peaceful illusion,
wartime confusion.
Breathe...

Each of us is the sum of our scars...

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1 posted 2003-03-31 12:16 PM


Simple and elegant yet beautiful and powerful..A few words can say so much more than a thousand if used correctly..amazing
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

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