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wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06
Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2003-03-30 09:25 PM



The Jock, the lover, the rebel
The sweet, the loving, the angel
Which to choose?
why must i fall in love with both

Holding my hand, stroking my hair
my angel, never leaves me
Laughing, parties, grabbing
the rebel never lets me go

I want both, to make them one
why must it always be the bad boy
their cologne lingers in my room
I want to fall in love with one

A fork is set out before me
a path to choose, which one
love, pain, both will come
whatever road i choose i am bound to lose

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

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X Q poet
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 47

1 posted 2003-03-31 09:32 AM


Hey...

Nice poem... And some dilemma you have there!

I can't give you any advice as to who to choose, not unless you would want me to, but the poetry, I can give you some thoughts there if you want...

http://www.xqpoetry.com

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA
2 posted 2003-03-31 10:48 AM


Hey, Mal.  I enjoyed this one.  Not quite sure where it's coming from. but that's alright...  lol  Anyway, this is probably one of the better ones I've read of yours.  Thanks for posting!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

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