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SilentFreija
Junior Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 37

0 posted 2003-03-30 05:37 PM

Here I stand
In a loud crowd of meaningless thoughts
I'm the darkness of the group
All eyes on me
Looking at how different I am
but here I stand not giving a damn in the world
I'm myself in the common crowd
Here with my chains I stand
With my deadly music and my out of the ordinary hair
Holding my head up high
and remembering to be proud of who I am

There are the girls with their Abercrombie and Fich shirts
There are the boys with their skateboards
There I am, wearing a black tanktop and black chained up pants and laughing
Kiss my soul with love
Hug my style
because here I stand, loving every second of it

Here I am with my darkly humorous thoughts
So free and full of confidence so one may steal
Individuality is my love
So here I stand and watch as others stare
Here I stand

© Copyright 2003 Adora Mullendore - All Rights Reserved

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2003-03-30 09:13 PM

Hey. I like you. I like the way you wrote this... reminds me of a few of my best ones I guess

I'm going to definitely keep an eye out for you

If I love you enough will you feel it over the distance?

SilentFreija
Junior Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 37

2 posted 2003-03-31 12:52 PM

aww...stop it ur making me blush. Heehee. Thanks, I'll try and post more after I read a couple more poems. I love this board!

Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me...
mend my broken heart and love me
because I forget how to smile.

SweetGhettoFlurt
Junior Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 15
Milw,WI

3 posted 2003-04-02 09:47 AM

Thiz wuz an awesome poem. I really like the way you keep your originality.

*~*SweetGhettoFlurt@aol.com*~*Marie*~*

straindmind
New Member

since 2003-03-24

Posts 9
MI, usa

4 posted 2003-04-02 12:42 PM

it was great its deep and mindfully penetrating! keep it up!

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

5 posted 2003-04-02 09:29 PM

good write. it shows you're not ashamed of who you are, i like it. ~Jess

"Poetry, she thought, wasn't written to be analyzed; it was meant to inspire without reason, to touch without understanding." -Nicholas Sparks

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