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OtherSideOfTheMirror
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0 posted 2003-03-30 10:50 AM


All that's supposed to happen will
I don't have to be perfect.
What I see when I close my eyes
Doesn't have to be what's there when I open them
There is nothing less than perfect
And above all,
I am beautiful.

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WinterWren
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1 posted 2003-03-30 06:13 PM


Good thoughts here, I especially like the end.
Well done, it gets my vote.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-04-05 02:50 PM




(smiles) Yay! Yes, you are so right and following your heart and being true to yourself is what makes anyone beautiful and you have the magic in your heart! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vlraynes
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3 posted 2003-04-05 02:52 PM



Ah yes...well, said, and so very true.
I love the positive attitude of this.
Wonderfully done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands
4 posted 2003-04-06 06:42 PM


getting my vote too

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
5 posted 2003-04-12 09:20 PM


You got my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

aaron woodside
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since 2001-09-26
Posts 256

6 posted 2003-04-13 12:33 PM


Hey girlie.  How have you been?  

I liked this.  Short, sweet and to the point.  We all have to love ourselves.  

Add one to your vote total.  

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
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BFE
7 posted 2003-04-13 02:15 AM


This is definately a poem to live by...everyone is beautiful, we just all need to learn to see beauty in ourselves. You have my vote hun.

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA
8 posted 2003-04-13 03:38 AM


I really like this one!  Definitely worthy of being in the book.  Your writing never ceases to amaze me.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

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