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0 posted 2003-03-30 10:00 AM


A fate ascribed to losers, I share their common goal
Sustained in middle places, in solitude my soul
Tranquil and still obedient: The art-work of my death
I choose the daily lonliness with every passing breath
I turn my back on friendships, my tears I won't withold
Acknowledging the landscape, of people made of gold

Once again guys: I appreciate harsh critiques!

Thanks btw, for making me feel welcome here!

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Saluting with misty eyes
1 posted 2003-03-30 10:57 PM


This is quite haunting. I thoroughly enjoyed it... and your website was an interesting place to visit as well...

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

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