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The Day You left

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SixtiesChick03
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0 posted 03-30-2003 12:20 AM       View Profile for SixtiesChick03   Email SixtiesChick03   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SixtiesChick03


I can't stop thinking
about the day you left.
You made my world
a total wreck.
You told me
that u still love me
and we'd be back together
soon.
But you lied to me.
In the beginning,
you had me believing,
that you sorry for the hurt
you inflicted upon me.
I soon realized,
you weren't sorry.
For if you were,
this pain you caused me
would be gone.


[This message has been edited by SixtiesChick03 (03-31-2003 01:52 AM).]

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1 posted 03-30-2003 10:51 PM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!
This hit way too close to home.
Great job.

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John Lennon

X Q poet
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2 posted 03-31-2003 03:18 AM       View Profile for X Q poet   Email X Q poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit X Q poet's Home Page   View IP for X Q poet

Nice...

People hurt sometimes don't they?

Keep it up sister!

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3 posted 04-01-2003 04:55 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Sad story all too often heard.  Keep writing and we will be reading.

     
To be hugged by a friend is wealth beyond words.

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4 posted 04-05-2003 02:57 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(big hugggssssss) Oh Sharlene, I send many angel hugs your way, dearest friend, sadly there are too many insincere apologies in this world and the thing I hate more than anything else is lies and liars! (sad sigh) I pray the truth can soon ease your heart, dearest friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharlene, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


5 posted 04-05-2003 03:01 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


Sharlene~
This is such an emotional piece, and you've expressed
the feelings very well.
Nicely done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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6 posted 04-05-2003 07:43 PM       View Profile for frolicking dolphin   Email frolicking dolphin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for frolicking dolphin

That does happen far too often to innocent ones like you,  you expressed your emotions really well in this poem

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

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7 posted 04-06-2003 09:49 PM       View Profile for WinterWren   Email WinterWren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WinterWren's Home Page   View IP for WinterWren

Since I didn't get to say this before,
Welcome to pip!!
I like this one alot, especially the ending.
Great Job!

WinterWren
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8 posted 04-06-2003 10:12 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

Yeah, it seems that way at time...sometimes people repeat over and over again that they're sorry, but they don't act sorry.

~Liz

Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you..
~Mr. Big

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9 posted 01-20-2004 10:27 PM       View Profile for kissa~rachelle   Email kissa~rachelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kissa~rachelle


  Sorry. I ---- this word. Too many times i have been hurt, and too many times they have said sorry, only to turn around and do it again. It has gotten to where this words means almost nothing to me. I think this poem is wonderful. The whole message is awesome! I cant wait to hear more!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

 
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