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Tabitha LeAnn
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 50
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2003-03-28 06:14 PM



It's the feeling of knowing your there,
knowing that you would make time for me even with none to spare.
It's the way your skin reflects the light of the moon so well,
and when you step out of the shower your skin holds that sweet smell.
It's the way you taste when we kiss,
and when you leave the things I miss.
The way I blush when you say things so sweet,
and how your poetry makes me weak.
It's the feeling of your fingers running through my hair,
and how when I'm with you I have not a care.
It's how you hold me when I'm scared,
and the way you watch me when I sleep like you wish our dreams were shared.
It's how you can be so gentle and yet so strong,
and it's how when I'm sad you sing my favorite song.
It's how you look into my eyes,
and how only you can hear my heart's cries.
It's how you love me and how I love you,
and no words could ever explain what it's like when it's just us two.



© Copyright 2003 Tabitha Manche - All Rights Reserved
Dance
Junior Member
since 2003-03-28
Posts 34

1 posted 2003-03-28 09:41 PM


True, oh so True.
I am amazed by all of your work, you're my new idol! heeheehee!

Lindsay
Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 59
South Dakota
2 posted 2003-03-28 11:15 PM


I loved your poem, it was really touching, it made me wish that i could feel that same way with my special someone
NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22
Posts 232
In my troll closet I be
3 posted 2003-03-29 12:54 PM


That is sooo cute! Awwww, I wish you the best of luck in the future and what a great poem to go along with how you are feeling!
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

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