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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2003-03-27 12:01 PM

Heyyy I just wrote this tonight... Not much for me to say about it I guess. Let me know what you think!

TWO ROWS BACK

Hi
I'm the guy that sits two rows back
Yeah, that's right
My name is Cody
We've talked once or twice
I can see we have a lot in common
Did you know?
We both listen to country music
Yeah, I saw you at the concert too
I'm not sure how well you know me
I know you pretty well
No, I'm not a stalker
I'm just the guy that sits two rows back
Global perspectives, that's right
Yeah, I was in child psychology too
I know you know me
We pick on eachother sometimes
Could we be friends?
I don't know...
I wish I knew
How can I get to know you better?
I'm not one to just strike up a conversation
I don't know what to say
Talk to me sometime, okay?
I'd love to get to know you
I'm the guy who sits two rows back

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

1 posted 2003-03-27 12:19 PM

hottie senior...all i can say

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

Tabitha LeAnn
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 50
Kansas, USA

2 posted 2003-03-27 06:16 PM

I really liked your poem. It was good and it made me think, alot. I love poems that do that. I hope to read more of your work!!!

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-03-29 10:55 AM

this is cute, i hope you get to to know whoever this is written about.
Jen

don't ever let others tell you who you are

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-03-29 10:57 AM

this is cute, i hope you get to to know whoever this is written about.
Jen

don't ever let others tell you who you are

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

5 posted 2003-03-29 01:12 PM

The title caught me from the first, it kinda reminds about the whole girl next door thing 'cept with a guy. Anywho, the poem was cool. I loved it, the thing where it was almost your thoughts, or just your side on the convo. Great idea. Loved it,

Riley

Windows stained with the fog, words written in by a girl.

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

6 posted 2003-03-29 01:15 PM

This was such a cute thought. I also hope you get to know who you were talking about in this... I always liked reading your work, this one is just as good.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

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