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dinky
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0 posted 2003-03-26 11:00 PM


I cried for you today,
stopped by and visited your grave
Wanted to talk to you,
but knew that i couldn't
tried to go home,
but knew that i wouldn't
You were my world,
my inspiration
You made me feel like someone,
in this great wide nation
I wanted to help,
but didn't know how,
now you're at peace,
without a doubt

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

© Copyright 2003 samantha rae - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-26 11:37 PM




(big hugggsssssss) And know always that through peace there is a presence always, and your inspiration will always glow as your loved one will never forget you and from the heavens above watch over you with light! (sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Samantha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Tabitha LeAnn
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 50
Kansas, USA
2 posted 2003-03-27 03:14 PM


That was an amazing poem.  Although, short it made me tear.  Its obvious how much your friend must of meant to you and with love like that your friendship will never die.  I'll look for more of your work.
Savage Quiescence
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since 2002-07-29
Posts 326
Wandering
3 posted 2003-03-28 09:59 AM


*Sigh* Too many sad poems today. This was short and sweet and in a way, the emotions are almost haunting. Thanks a bunch!
Smiles
Sky

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

dinky
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since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

4 posted 2003-04-02 05:58 PM


hey,
thx sooo much for replyin and takin the time to read this
~sam~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
5 posted 2003-04-15 08:40 PM


Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
6 posted 2003-04-21 02:39 AM


So terribly sad but tender write.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
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Wonderland
7 posted 2003-04-25 07:59 PM


this was good man

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

peachesNcream
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Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
8 posted 2003-04-25 09:45 PM


Oh, this makes me want to cry! Reminds me so much of my grandma. Ahh, this was good! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

9 posted 2003-04-26 01:01 AM


Sam this was really beautiful. You have really improved as a writer! You just keep getting better and better. Great job and keep up the good work
             *Allison*

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