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Teen Poetry #6

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ShadyMakaveli
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 128

0 posted 2003-03-26 10:59 PM

This world is more than I can conceive
Problems are growing at an alarming rate
So confused, don't know what to believe
Walking down a path that brings my fate

Dropping to my knees I wonder why
Can't there be peace of mind
Almost want to breakdown and cry
Alone in the world, walking blind

Now I see what was out of sight
Guess I was being ignorant before
Always negative, which wasn't right
So much inside me I couldn't ignore

At times I wanted to walk away
Hide from the problems inside me
Stood up, dealt with it my way
What life has for me, i'm ready to see

SweetGhettoFlurt
Junior Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 15
Milw,WI

1 posted 2003-04-02 12:53 PM

Tight poem. I thought it wuz aight.

*~*SweetGhettoFlurt@aol.com*~*Marie*~*

straindmind
New Member

since 2003-03-24

Posts 9
MI, usa

2 posted 2003-04-02 12:57 PM

it sounds to deal a lot with what is going on in the world and above.

SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

3 posted 2003-04-02 08:07 PM

I really liked the poem...keep up the good work

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