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Street Poet
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since 2002-07-07
Posts 82


0 posted 2003-03-26 10:03 PM



Today I seen this girl
To tell you the truth she rocked my world
I mean even though I didn't know her
She was a queen in my eyes
I can tell by her vibe
That she was all woman
She was a queen who needed a king
And I was ready to be that
The way she carried herself,I really didn't know how to act
She saw me, and I saw her
This girl had what I call "romantic magic"
When she walked in a room her body commanded attention
While speaking her sweet sexy voice made you wanna listen
The natural instincts of a man would be to go and say hi
But its too bad I'm shy
Truth be told I never felt this way about a woman
This is truely love at first sight
She is the love of my life
But we don't know each other, isn't that ironic
Forever in my mind, but out of my life in a split second
Beauty like that is unforgetable and hard to let go
I'm in love with someone I don't know

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dinky
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since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

1 posted 2003-03-26 10:40 PM


good write!
i especially like the last two lines
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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