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Kevin
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0 posted 2003-03-25 10:11 PM


Can’t figure out why I stand in the rain
while they run for the shelter of playing the game,
peeking over their shoulders with questioning stares:
“Can’t he see that there’s nothing to offer him there?”
And the water beads down over forehead and eyes
giving teardrops an adequate look of disguise
for a heart always tired, unable to run
to the shelter of all those awaiting the sun.


© Copyright 2003 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Albino_Jenn
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1 posted 2003-03-25 11:55 PM


This is an awesome poem...good job...I look forward to reading more from you..you really express emotion well....
Jenn

**Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life**

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2 posted 2003-03-26 12:20 PM


Wow...  This is awesome!  Haven't seen you around here much lately, but I've always liked your work.  I really liked this.  Thanks for sharing!

      - Cody -

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3 posted 2003-03-26 12:34 PM


hey you sexy thing you! amazing poem hun! i miss talking to ya! anyways great poem i loved it.
robin

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