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Starsfalling
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some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-03-25 09:25 PM



Angels soar with a roar, and i dont notice
my mind has but one focus..
even when you stray i still look up,
and see the stars, and think of you
and know I'm loved

Loving you, makes the life oh so grand
i could fly if i wanted...
and theres only one place to fly too
you and your arms...
where forever i can be lost but still be found

I love you... just doesnt seem enough
if only you knew how much it hurts... not being there
its enough to drive a man insane...
just enough to run away and fly away for you
my heart is yours

X-rays and gama rays, is what they call it
but i call it love struck, and happiness
all the bad things just filter through..
leaving me with you
the way i can only dream


this isnt enough for her....
-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

© Copyright 2003 Lance Keber - All Rights Reserved
NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22
Posts 232
In my troll closet I be
1 posted 2003-03-25 09:29 PM


Just a question...but is this the Alex in Dayton by chance?
Anyway, I really liked this and I'm sure she will too. Its very cute.
I love how you ended this.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

Starsfalling
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some where deep in the shadows
2 posted 2003-03-25 09:34 PM


lol... umm no mine is from somewhere else, lol sorry
thanks im glad ya enjoyed it
-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

NSnaomian
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3 posted 2003-03-25 09:37 PM


*LoL* Don't I feel silly... You sound just like a Lance that my friend Alex knows... Same type of writing/style as well. I don't know him too well, but just a try I guess.
Anyway... bye now.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

Drummerboy06
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since 2003-03-23
Posts 46
Indiana
4 posted 2003-03-26 12:28 PM


LANCE!!!!   Yo, whats up?  I knew it was you when I saw your profile.  You probably have no clue as to who I am do you?  Pyromania777 off SN.  Lot of feeling in this piece, it shows how you feel for Alix.  I like the line 'where forever i can be lost but still be found,' thats good, real good.  Great piece, keep up the good work.  Eventually the pain will go away, though it will take time.  'Cmon, perk up man!
Starsfalling
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since 2003-03-18
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some where deep in the shadows
5 posted 2003-03-26 02:09 PM


lol drummer boy.. good to seeya.... there is no pain hehe this was my attempts at a happy poem, lol
guess im just happy
thanks
-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

Starsfalling
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since 2003-03-18
Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows
6 posted 2003-03-26 02:13 PM


ummm NSnaomian if ur alex is from VA then maybe... lol otherwise its a wicked huge coincidence, hehe umm i dont think its the same cuz mines not from Daytona, lol
dont feel silly though i sometimes do the same
-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

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