Bliss, Destruction, and Aftermath

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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-03-25 03:44 PM

I reminisce
In my bliss
And follow the path
To the aftermath
This is the introduction
To destruction

Every night I see
Another side of he
The one that is inside of me

Every night I’m shown a world
Into which I am hurled
Where all dreams are unfurled

This is an introduction
To destruction

It seems that all too often
As my heart begins to soften
It’s struck down into a coffin

Follow the path
To aftermath

It happens every time
I form a lyric or rhyme
And the bells begin to chime

Every night a scene rehearses
Creatures’ putting enchanting curses
Into twisted little verses

I reminisce
In my bliss
And follow the path
To the aftermath
This is the introduction
To destruction

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-25 04:30 PM

Great poem. Your poetry seems to be getting better, In my eyes, Other may disagree.

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

2 posted 2003-03-25 04:51 PM

this was great!!
cant wait to read more
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

3 posted 2003-03-25 06:20 PM

mmmm yes, I like!

My favorite:

"Every night a scene rehearses
Creatures’ putting enchanting curses
Into twisted little verses"

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

4 posted 2003-03-25 07:04 PM

Chanson quoted my favorite part. This is really good. Kept me hooked. Keep 'em comin'!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-03-25 07:20 PM

thanx guys, it's been a while since I've posted and I thought my work might not have the reception it used to, I'm glad to see a few people stil like it.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2003-03-25 10:07 PM

I've always liked your work..this is no exception. Glad I can vote for it!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-03-25 11:06 PM

(big hugggsssssss) If you've encountered bliss previously then there is all reason to believe in the road ahead so much more of it will await you! (sigh) I send healing hugs your way and my dear vote, dearest friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

8 posted 2003-04-13 11:18 PM

Got my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

9 posted 2003-04-14 05:56 PM

This poem is GREAT! But that's no suprise! I love your writing...the way you put your words together is unbelievable! I wish I had the ability to write like you! Very nice write! Has my vote!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

10 posted 2003-04-14 07:08 PM

awesome, just awesome!

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

11 posted 2003-04-15 08:21 PM

yeah, im definitely voting for this as well ~ Talia

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