I might have lost my wings

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Teen Poetry #6

I might have lost my wings

pearl6884
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 72
California coast

0 posted 2003-03-25 12:23 PM

You came to me
Below dawn's radiant gleams
You promised me the stars
The moon
And the sun
You told me
You dream of me
Of sweet kisses
Of painting murals
In my sky
But when you called me
"Yours"
I had to walk away
I won't be locked
In a cage
Unable to fly
I will not lose my wings
To just anyone
With a paintbrush.

[This message has been edited by pearl6884 (03-25-2003 12:24 PM).]

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-03-25 07:17 PM

wow, first one I've read from you, very good I'll say, I loved the ending, as well as the mental pictures you created.
~Lexy

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

2 posted 2003-03-25 09:11 PM

You do such a great job...
I don't know what to tell you
except that I absolutely love this one too!
Keep em comin!!
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

pearl6884
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 72
California coast

3 posted 2003-03-27 11:02 AM

Thanks to everyone who read and enjoyed this! It means a lot to me.

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

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