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pearl6884
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since 2003-03-23
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California coast

0 posted 2003-03-23 03:29 PM


The moon dips
Through a black-cherry night
As we oscillate between laughter
And silence
You, fairy, are full of music
Yet unheard
Sound Shape Color
Everything I know
Resides In you
I want to save you
From whatever silences you
And makes you cry
So as we sit
And ponder answers
To questions we can't ask
I can't sleep
And you can't dream
I wish I could say
"Friends forever"
But all I can do is think
"I'll miss you, fairy."
And hope for it to be enough.

© Copyright 2003 Sarah - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-03-23 05:06 PM


How lovely Sarah!
Once again..a warm welcome to Passions.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

CSwtThng
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since 1999-07-28
Posts 124

2 posted 2003-03-23 11:15 PM


Very nice! Great job!
PoeTik JusTice
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3 posted 2003-03-24 01:54 PM


Wow, I absolutely loved this poem, it was written very beautifully! Great work.   You have my vote.  

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
     *~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

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4 posted 2003-03-24 01:59 PM




(smiles) Oh Sarah, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, know your fairy friend is always with you deep in your heart as when we follow our imaginations you can always make it feel as real as possible! (big huggggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sarah, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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5 posted 2003-03-24 03:05 PM


Lovely, voting.

pearl6884
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since 2003-03-23
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California coast
6 posted 2003-03-27 11:07 AM


Thanks for taking the time to read my poetry!

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

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7 posted 2003-03-27 12:33 PM


Clear-eyed about growing up, and leaving it behind. God I love this.
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