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lilmissbabyteddybear Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 17Abilene, Texas |
Noone understands, not you, not them, not even me. You say you know: But you don't. You don't know how I feel, and that means you don't understand. So you can't tell me why I still love him. Why I still after everything that has happend, want to be with him. He betrayed me. It is all to painful. All this torture desrtoyes my sleep, inturupts my thoughts, kills my laughter and enocourages my pain and my heartache. To want him: but to know he doesn't want me. To love him with all my heart: Knowing he lied about loving me. It's all to painful to bear, and it seems so unreal. I miss him. Even after so long, and with so much pain, I still love him. If time heals all wounds, Why do i still cry from all of this pain? I wish it was all a dream. But it isn't. I feel as if I'm dying over and over again. I'm left alone in this blackhole of loneliness and dispare. I just don't understand, why do I still love him? Why does it all have to hurt so much? Isn't love suposed to be fun and exciting? Something youshare with that one special person? I don't understand, if it is suposed to be that way, why am i all alone? And why am I not having any fun? I say love hurts. >>*:):(~+~+~JeNnYgOoD~+~+~:(:)*<< |
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Denea Furr Junior Member
since 2002-11-03
Posts 31Indiana |
i REALLY liked this poem, i personally dont think you should change a thing, you expressed yourself in a way that i could relate to. nice "What a tangled web we weave, when we practice to decieve." |
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lilmissbabyteddybear Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 17Abilene, Texas |
Thank you very much.. that means alot.. Jenny >>*:):(~+~+~JeNnYgOoD~+~+~:(:)*<< |
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