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Antonios Words of Passion
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since 2003-03-21
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0 posted 2003-03-21 12:46 PM


Have you ever wonder how it feels to be hated
Or why the whites and blacks were discriminated
But feeling like you getting disowned by your own parents
And not bein loved by ones u loved the most
I fee like that all the time knowing that things dont go online
I feel so depressed, that sometimes I wanted take my life
And not growing up to have a wife
Or having kids to see me live
To see me succeed and always forgive
To see it come true, it seems so real
To imagine not be loved changes how I feel
But now my name is called for me to go
As is see reality going very slow
My route to Gods hands, my sin stays still
Forevermore i shall have my will



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Albino_Jenn
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since 2003-03-03
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Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2003-03-21 04:43 PM


This is a touching poem, live life to the fullest and forget the things that get ya down, your kind heart deserves love and devotion, and you are needed hear on earth!! Good poem keep up the good work!!!!
Jenn

**Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life**

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