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Teen Poetry #6

In the Eyes of an Angel

Antonios Words of Passion
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since 2003-03-21

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0 posted 2003-03-21 12:32 PM

An angel shall never leave the hands of angry god
Nor shall he question him
An angel shall never do wrong
And begin life as a virtue
When thee sets forth a path
Thy shall go about it well
For if wrong, shall he feel the Gods wrath
And another place shall thy dwell
Beggining life as a impatient stance
begins churning down to improper importance
Doing well, shall God give you a chance?
Looking upon his footsteps his light becomes dense
I fail thee and now i shall suffer what ever comes upon thy
Losing my trust between Him
All of my difficult journies only defies
my signifigant values of nature
that thy set upon my everlasting virtues
Only sets my standards to an desirable whim
Of my eyes set to the Heavens Gates

PoeTik JusTice
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since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

1 posted 2003-03-21 12:39 PM

This was a very beautiful poem! I really enjoyed this. Good work!

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