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*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

0 posted 2003-03-19 01:10 AM

We've been through so much
Have caused each other pain
Things we can't forget
Reminders fall like rain

The scars will never heal
The wounds are much to deep
It doesn't matter what we feel
The steps are much to step

We may long to be together
To feel each other's touch
But dreaming of a future
Was asking for too much

We lost out only chance
A long long time ago
Clinging to the memory
Just won't make it so

We can pretend it doesn't matter
But it will never change the day
It will never give us back
What we've already thrown away

Only if your lucky
And only the chosen few
Will share the kind of love
Like the one I had with you

But it could never be
Time would take it's toll
Life's pain slowly surfaced
It can break the strongest soul

It will always be there waiting
In the shadows of regret
Time can change the season
But the seasons never forget

We can't turn back the clock
Or take back fallen tears
We can't rewrite the pages
We've lost throughout the years

History always repeats
No one is to blame
Faded is the ink
But the story remains the same

So many words have been unspoken
So much left unsaid
The chapters have been written
The pages have been read

There will be no happy ending
A tragic tale this must be
They'll be no Kiss to break the spell
No magic will set us free

What fate brought together
our past has torn apart
Blank pages go unwritten
From a story of the heart

It's a little long, lo siento

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

CSwtThng
Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 124

1 posted 2003-03-19 01:22 AM

This is a wonderful poem. I been there before. Very nicely done!!

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

2 posted 2003-03-19 12:22 PM

I really enjoyed this poem! I always enjoy what you write though! Nice work. Oh and there are a few little typos just to let ya know!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-03-19 02:08 PM

The length is just right!
Beautiful, well written poem!
Great Job!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2003-03-19 07:17 PM

I love it! Its absolutely beautiful and the length is perfect.
Jenn

don't ever let others tell you who you are

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

5 posted 2003-03-20 09:04 PM

Thank you guys for your comments they are always appreciated. I'm glad that every one likes the poem. I know there are a few typo's but you can only edit for so long before it won't let you anymore and well..It won't let me anymore sorry about that though!!
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

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