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Albino_Jenn
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since 2003-03-03
Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-03-15 04:23 PM


You slowly fade as time moves on
My feelings left behind
The friendship we once shared
I have lost, and can not find
You’re heart has changed
You’re not the same
You take for granted
That I will always remain
How foolish of me to think
That I was more then just some chick
That I meant something to you
Oh how you contradict
You said that I was special,
Truly awesome and great
You said you’d never lose me
Well it might just be too late
You my friend need to see
I won’t put up with this sh*t
If you want my love and devotion
You must cherish it
I am not some girl
You can only talk to at will
My life is moving forward
As I watch you standing still
You wait for opportunity
To come knocking at your door
I won’t be that other friend
I will wait for you no more
You slowly fade as time moves on
My feelings left behind
The friendship we once shared
I have lost, and can not find


**Tell me what ya really think..I can handle it**
Thanks, Jenn

**Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life**

[This message has been edited by Albino_Jenn (03-15-2003 04:26 PM).]

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TigerZ
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since 2002-01-02
Posts 83
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2003-03-15 09:44 PM


I loved it.  Thx for the read

A life without love…is no life at all.

A.L
Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131

2 posted 2003-03-16 02:46 PM


That was a great poem, I can relate to it so much...guys just dont realize what they've truly lost until its gone, but they expect us to wait around until then...
Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A
3 posted 2003-03-16 08:59 PM


Hey jenn!! First of all id like to thank you for your wonderful coment to my latest poem. As for your poem it was extremely well written. I'm a guy and i definitely agree with ya 100 percent. It's not right for a guy to toy with a girls heart in any way. Well i look forward to reading more from you and if u ever need someone to talk to ya can contact me on my im screen name which is chrissccr18 or email me at soccerplayer4life04@hotmail.com
Albino_Jenn
Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2003-03-17 07:14 PM


Thanks for the offer of contacting you..I will keep that in mind..you can contact me too if you want..albino_jenn@hotmail.com...your a sweetheart, thanks again
Jenn

**Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life**

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