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Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

0 posted 2003-03-12 12:31 PM

Life is life.
Love is love.
Angels are blessings
from above.
You are my angel,
and always will be.
My heart bears a lock,
but you hold the key.

You are my sunshine
on a cloudy day.
You're the one
who washes my tears away.
My life's been so much better
since I met you.
I wish I could tell you,
I wish you knew.
If only you knew how much
you mean to me.
That's what my only wish
...would be.

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

1 posted 2003-03-12 11:59 AM

Ahh... Indeed, I too have felt the sting of a love that just doesn't know how you feel. Be careful however, it can quickly turn into an obsession, which leads to stalking, and then kidnapping and then... WHOA! HEY THERE! never mind all that. We're talking about you right?

Anyway this was a good poem. It flowed in the most grand of ways!
Keep it up
Darkness

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

2 posted 2003-03-12 01:03 PM

I loved this poem! Very good! I definitely know how it feels also for someone to not know how you feel...Nice work!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-03-12 03:52 PM

Wonderful well expressed poem!
Since I didn't read your first post....
Welcome to pip!!!
I really like this one, I'll be looking forward to more from you.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2003-03-12 04:08 PM

Wow, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. I agree with Darkness, I too have felt this way before, its not always pleasant but I hope everything works out for you. Again, great job.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

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