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Darkness Awaits
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Darkness Awaits |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Watch the blue sky turn to dark purple and the clouds cover the sun Darkness is coming... The haunting fact they're after me may be the cause of this storm Lightning strikes in the distance Take in everything thats changing to blink would be a sin So beautiful... The clouds break and a giant hand appears it reaches down to snatch me away First instinct is to run... I linger here one second longer one last glimpse of this scence Breath-taking imagery... Fleeing from this place and screaming your name Taste the fear... If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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LuckyFelix Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 34Here. |
very descriptive, i like it. |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
Staci, great write!  I like the way I can visualize each stanza as I read. Good job hun!  ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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