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Teen Poetry #6

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Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

0 posted 2003-03-09 04:12 AM

Why do people here leave with clear-cut alibis?
With truth and of lies, lurks in their eyes.

I separate and sigh.

Where are our faces when we play out our facade?
When we’re playing it hard and we’ve lost our place,

In the story line.

But

Where do the women here decide whether to come or go?
The men will revere but still will wonder to follow.

My heart is cut in half.

Floating in torn bipolar skies.

Why do people here leave with clear-cut alibis?
With lost verity, doubled with sincerity.

I separate and sigh

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2003-03-10 06:31 PM

"Why do people here leave with clear-cut alibis?
With lost verity, doubled with sincerity."

I really liked those lines. This is the first post I've read from you and i think it is a very intersting piece.

Regina

"heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

2 posted 2003-03-12 01:20 PM

I really liked this, very well written!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-03-12 03:49 PM

Wonderful poem!
I especially love the 3 lines right after the first "I separate and sigh"
Well done!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

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