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Eminem wanna be
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0 posted 2003-02-25 10:25 PM



You moved back into town
and again you wore that golden crown.
Brandon I STILL love you
by moving back do you know what your putting me through?

I can't do this ALL over again
and right now I don't know where to begin.
You have stephinea
but do you still love me?

Am I still at least your friend?
Thats how it's supposed to be till the end...
remember that's what we said,
It's still branded in my head...

Just like EVERY special memory we had
from funny to stupid to good to bad.
You still act like you used to around me
so cute, and funny.

I just want to ask you one thing right now
but the words won't come out so how
I'll try my best and here goes...Why do you have to move back? Because now my love grows......


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1 posted 2003-02-26 12:18 PM


A very cute write and I enjoyed your humor.

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

Eminem wanna be
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2 posted 2003-02-26 12:23 PM


really thanks
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3 posted 2003-02-26 12:12 PM




(smiles) I just love the light-hearted feel of this, dearest friend, I believe if we can cherish these memories and hold them dear to our heart, no matter if its just a ride on the carousel together or sharing an ice cream cone, it can bring much joy! (big hugggssss) This is precious, dearest friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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my own special world
4 posted 2003-02-26 03:52 PM


Very cute, thanks for a great read.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

aries_luv_ppl
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5 posted 2003-02-26 03:53 PM


I can feel the poem.
Eminem wanna be
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6 posted 2003-02-26 07:07 PM


you guys actually think it's THAT good? Gees it seems like I have writen better but....uhhhhhhh ok!
WhiteRose
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7 posted 2003-03-21 12:14 PM


Enjoyed the read of this.
carol
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8 posted 2003-04-12 03:48 PM


Really a good write

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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