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The fire of passion from the eyes of a 17 year old
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The fire of passion from the eyes of a 17 year old |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
When I look at you I see everything I don't want to I try to be a regular guy and see you as just another pretty face but when I look into your eyes I see that the fire of passion was kindled in a completely different fashion For me it would be just that, A moment of passion but for you it is a need to be loved a need to be held and one you would do anything to obtain so what do I do? have my fun and run or Wait and be the one? ======================================================================================================== Note: I know this isnt really all that good, but Im lacking innovation to improve upon it at the moment so gimme your thoughts as well as suggestions. As always, I am grateful for your responses and hope that you enjoy my writing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good poem here. Your plight is a common one. I can't tell you what to do, but I can tell you what to not do....do not wait.  If you think you might have a chance, go for it. Good luck.  -j- Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Yep, agreed. Suck the marrow out of life....just be sure not to choke on the bone..~Carly, the great-wise--hardship-unadvisor empty arms |
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