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Chloey
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0 posted 2003-02-24 08:54 PM


When I'm all alone
and no one's around
when I'm feelin blue
she turns around my frown
she's that one special person
my very best gal
when i have a problem
she's always a great pal
she's just like a sister
just a call away
If i need her by my side
she'll be glad to stay
her name is erin
she's here till the end
that's why she'll always be
My very BEST friend!


If you don't like the way I am....Screw You!!!!

[This message has been edited by Chloey (02-24-2003 10:52 PM).]

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frolicking dolphin
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1 posted 2003-02-25 03:15 PM


Nice dedication to your bestfriend, they are the ones who will be with us through everything and so much more.  Nice way of expressing this in the poem.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

BrokenDreams
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2 posted 2003-02-25 07:12 PM


this is sweet. It brought a smile to my face thinking of my best friend. thanks for the read.

Jenn

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3 posted 2003-02-25 08:20 PM


Sweet, I like it, Good write, nice read.


Ri

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

Chloey
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4 posted 2003-02-25 09:12 PM


THANX EVERYONE!


        Chloey

If you don't like the way I am.....screw you!

WinterWren
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5 posted 2003-02-25 11:43 PM


Very sweet poem, you showed your friend right?
Enjoyed.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Chloey
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6 posted 2003-02-26 10:34 AM


Of Course! She about cried! She really liked it!


             *$*Chloey*$*

If you don't like the way I am.....screw you!

Jenn Cirrincione
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7 posted 2003-02-28 09:14 AM


Very, very sweet job.
Beautiful description.

Jenn

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

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