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AJMGW
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0 posted 2003-02-21 12:34 PM


They say,
"you don't know what love is"
But how can we not?
"you're just a kid"
Yeah and so were you.

"You don't know what you're talking about"
Well I think I do.
How can you say that I don't know love?
I mean,

I Love You

^*~AJMGW~*^

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-02-21 01:07 PM




Yay!!! You go girl! Every one knows love, what matters is how we use it or how much we use it, and you truly show unconditional love through these words to your friends and loved ones, I love it! (smiles) This has my vote, sweet friend, in so few words you say so much, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BrokenDreams
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In The Clouds
2 posted 2003-02-21 06:08 PM


this is so cute! I love it. Its short, sweet, and expresses the emotions well.

Jenn

think about this: everyone you know will someday die.

Pollita
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the unknown realm of insanity
3 posted 2003-02-21 07:04 PM


I think this is very cute!!!
And very good, and true!
Everyone knows love...and everyone will know heartbreak. Its something that everyone experiences...even if they may be a kid, they still are intitled to it.
For me, love is well known, and not very well hidden. Lol!
Hope to see more from you!

This does have my vote (incase u were wondering)

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4 posted 2003-02-25 05:48 PM


Love comes in so many forms and for someone to negate it is so devastating.  Good topic for a poem.

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

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5 posted 2003-02-26 12:33 PM


Opps forgot to vote.

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (02-26-2003 12:34 AM).]

aries_luv_ppl
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6 posted 2003-02-26 03:56 PM


so true...in so many ways...

yet I won't claim...I know love...

Voted for you

Angel
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7 posted 2003-03-02 01:38 AM


Great job
Triskaidekaphobia
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8 posted 2003-03-04 03:56 AM


It brought a smile to my face and I ain't half a miserable sod, so well done!

This is so simple and effective that you've got my vote, friend.

There should be a psychology of feet. For do we not make decisions with our legs and walk about on our brains? What do you mean "No, not really"?

boy and his spirit
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9 posted 2003-03-04 10:21 AM


love is so important in life and it comes in many ways. i agree with the message you send wholeheartedly. everyone told me i was too young to love but of course that is never the case.

PoeTik JusTice
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10 posted 2003-03-04 01:15 PM


I love this poem! It's so cute and true! You got my vote

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
     *~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

frolicking dolphin
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11 posted 2003-03-04 03:35 PM


Very nice poem, you got my vote

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

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