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Teen Poetry #6

Music

Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

0 posted 2003-02-20 12:27 PM

Music is my pain killer.
It soothes my soul
and calms me down.
It feels that empty hole.

I listen to Em's song Kim
the chorus really hits me.
It fits the words I have to say
It's my "calm down" key.

There's so many things to say
but don't know how to get them out
I listen to some music
and my feelings it makes me want to shout.

Music calms me down
when I'm mad.
It makes me happy
when I'm sad.

.....Music....

"so long(edited by moderator) you did me so wrong. I don't wanna go on livin in this world without you"-Eminem (KIM)

*~Crystal~*

[This message has been edited by Eminem wanna be (02-20-2003 07:45 AM).]

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

1 posted 2003-02-21 07:00 PM

hey,
this was really good!
i luv that song kim!
good write!
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

2 posted 2003-02-24 05:08 PM

thanks a lot

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