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History... this one is brief but to the point

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Paragon
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0 posted 02-19-2003 11:21 PM       View Profile for Paragon   Email Paragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Paragon


Leave me alone
You follow me from place to place
Let me go
Get out of my face
No matter what I do
They will not forget about you
You are the Former- Me
You are my history
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1 posted 02-19-2003 11:25 PM       View Profile for PoetryIsLife   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetryIsLife

Heh.... hey newbie. Definetly short, but you are right, to the point. While I might've taken the potential for a longer poem and run with it, I can see why you went for a short one. Shorter poems, when written right, can contain a punch.

I hope you're enjoying yourself here.

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I absolutly love this. You're right, short but impactful. Try not to regret.

Jenn

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i'm glad you kept this one short its best this way.
 
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