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Kielo
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0 posted 2003-02-19 01:34 PM



The person this is for knows who they are. Of course, you don't have to be all that intelligent to figure out who it is, I guess... *shrug*

You are my shining star
because I don't live in the daytime.
You guide me through the dark,
leading me by your light.
You are the star I wish upon,
and you are the unmoving foundation
where I rest my faith.
The heavens were never so beautiful
until you appeared in them.



I love you!

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

© Copyright 2003 Jeremiah Leonard - All Rights Reserved
NSnaomian
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1 posted 2003-02-20 11:48 AM


Awww, thats cute. Well done.
Laura

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-Oscar Wilde

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2 posted 2003-02-20 04:19 PM


Quite cute, and sweet, Kielo. You did good.

It seemed a bit short... it almost felt like, even if this isn't true, that it came together quickly. That doesn't have to be a good or bad thing. I was just left feeling like we were only given the tip of the iceberg, you know?

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"On the plains of Hesitation lie the blackend bones of countless millions, who, at the verge of victory, sat down to wait, and waiting - died."
    

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3 posted 2003-02-20 04:46 PM


Well of course it was only the tip of the iceberg; it was about me I do hope I'm right lol

Kielo I miss you!!!! Come back to me!!!!  *smooches*

Sometimes you find a friend where once there wasn't one. Sometimes you find a love where once there was a friend.

Kielo
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4 posted 2003-02-20 11:17 PM


Yah, m'dear, its about you. And yes, its only the tip of the iceberg, but I don't want to expose all my dark secrets So to you.

I love you muchlys Rhonda...

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

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