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molly_the_dolly
Junior Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 25
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-02-17 11:15 PM


A small town girl,
away from home.
Nothing familiar,
she's all alone.

No one to turn to,
nowhere to go.
She's made no friends,
has nothing to show.

The home she has,
and the home she knew,
seem years apart.
She feels so blue.

She misses her mom,
her dad, her cat,
and the way she wiped her feet,
on the welcome mat.

She's all growen up now,
on adult on her own.
Finaly realizes,
what everyone has knowen.

There's a place,
in this cold world for her.
But she'll always cherish,
the way things were.

She will be alright,
she's here to stay.
She'll make her place,
day by day.

She buys a new friend,
a little black cat,
And finally wipes her feet,
on her very own welcome mat.

© Copyright 2003 Ms Amanda - All Rights Reserved
snoduck
Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99
Selah, WA
1 posted 2003-02-18 12:09 PM


i liked that.  It kind of brought tears to my eyes... but it was a good poem.  Thanks for sharing!

-Erica-

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since 2003-01-03
Posts 696
washington, USA
2 posted 2003-02-18 06:16 PM


Oh wow!!(Snifle, sniffle) I loved this! It is just like what it feels like to move out of your home and be out on your own for the first time it's scary in the begining but after awhile you start your own life and cherish the memories. WOnderfully done, I couldn't have said it better!
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2003-08-12 05:17 PM


Love this poem

I was molly but changed my e-mail addy
i started reading it and brought back old memories, good and bad.

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