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Paragon
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0 posted 2003-02-16 09:42 PM



Alone again
Me, Myself, and I...
My only friends
What have I done?
Why have I been robbed of my sun?
Can I not be happy too?
Must life always be blue?

Everything seems amiss
Nothing feels like it should
Tonight just isnt my night
Why have I befallen this blight?
Is there some ominous wrong that I must right?

I dont know why
I wake up
with only the desire to cry
My options are few
All I can think of, I tried
What should I do?
To be happy,
Just like you.
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Give me honesty... brutal honesty :P

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Quiet Acquiescence
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somewhere out here
1 posted 2003-02-16 09:45 PM


wow. i so felt this one.
nice job.

WinterWren
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2 posted 2003-02-16 11:29 PM


I loved this one, especially the 2nd stanza.
Wonderful, heartfelt poem.
Great Job!

WinterWren
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3 posted 2003-02-17 11:12 PM


nise stuff, i felt it, like all the feelings came back to me. Great job
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4 posted 2003-02-19 03:51 PM




(big hugggsssssss) What I'm about to say is brutally sincere; true happiness begins with YOU! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, dearest friend, I too have been there, then when I learned to love myself, things have improved greatly! You must believe in yourself, find an awakening, believe you are a being of light, then from there embrace the world and let them see your smile! (sigh) I send my prayers your way, dearest friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paragon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Justbleu
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5 posted 2003-02-20 12:15 PM


Depression sucks....honest feelings you write!!!  
KEEP WRITING!!!!
Bridgette

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