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Teen Poetry #6

Someone To Save Me

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2003-02-16 05:49 PM

Some days I wish everything would just stop,
And the snow would melt away,
And I'd be able to get you out of my head,
Just long enough to feel like I'd been saved.
I need to be saved,
By anything,
Anyone,
Just as long as I didn't feel like this anymore.
I'd like to wake up one morning,
And smile because it was a brand new day,
Because right now,
It feels like the same day is repeating itself.
Just once I'd like to be good enough for someone,
I'd like to live without fear,
Find someone who rids me of inhibition.
Just someone to save me...
Because I'm drowning.

"It's hard to look in the mirror these days when everyone has everything you'd rather be."-Saves The Day

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-02-20 08:06 PM

Erin~
I think many of us have felt this way
at various times in our lives.
You've expressed it very well.
Nicely penned.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

2 posted 2003-02-20 08:11 PM

I agree, many of us go through this.
...and! You're not drowning! *holds you up*
You're just so pretty...

Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2003-02-20 08:23 PM

yeah...like today, I know how you feel, about one day repeating itself, I hate the repition and monotonoy. Great piece.
~Lexy

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